yossarian 0 Posted November 17, 2009 You can take away my sweetheart Not troubled a bit You can steal all my silver I won''t have a fitYou can key my new beemer I will care not a joltBut please Auntie Delia Don''t sell Grant HoltHe''s happy and smiley He runs around lotsHe''s good in the air Footballs'' Freddie FlintoftHe''s gonna get 30 Hold the trophy aloftHe worth fifty-thousand of the likes of Lee CroftSo I beg you Aunt Delia Dont sell Grant HoltI''m starting to love him He has zero faultsI''m a married man So how can it be that I find Grant Holta bit sexy Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Camuldonum 0 Posted November 17, 2009 Does not scan and you do not resolve the rhythm of "You can take away my sweetheart". You need a seventh verse to do that I think. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Romantic 0 Posted November 18, 2009 If the board (or in common forum parlance "Delia") sell Holt in January, the type of little note I''ll be sending will require many little letters from newspapers some Prit Stick and a decidedly less chirpy tone of voice! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites