im spartacus canary 0 Posted December 15, 2013 mr pompous last flipped outsometime in decemberhis hobby was to rave and shoutat pink un forum membersmulti users everyonewas his general rulehe didn''t know how to have funjust how to be cruuuuu-elthen one night out of his brainsfull of hops and barleyhe heard some heavy rattling chainshis old mate jacob marleyhe told him he should mend his waysgod has no love for sinnersyou''ll spend your after life in flamesand have to watch the b-i-innersMr P he hated snowbut set off in a blizzardgrabbed a sprig of misltetoeand went to find first wizardnot to late to make ammendshe had to shake that ghost offflying round the barnby bendson his way to lowest-oftMr Pompous said to wizcan we kiss and make upim sorry all about about old poststhat i did find and rake upwhen wiz saw the misltoehis knees they turned to jellyand arm in arm they went insideto watch a stream on te-elly.... [:D] Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
OldRobert 38 Posted December 15, 2013 Before the insults rain in Spartacus............loved it.[;)] Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Redders Right Foot 22 Posted December 15, 2013 brill Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
William Darby 0 Posted December 15, 2013 [quote user="im spartacus"]mr pompous last flipped outsometime in decemberhis hobby was to rave and shoutat pink un forum membersmulti users everyonewas his general rulehe didn''t know how to have funjust how to be cruuuuu-el then one night out of his brainsfull of hops and barleyhe heard some heavy rattling chainshis old mate jacob marleyhe told him he should mend his waysgod has no love for sinnersyou''ll spend your after life in flamesand have to watch the b-i-innersMr P he hated snowbut set off in a blizzardgrabbed a sprig of misltetoeand went to find first wizardnot to late to make ammendshe had to shake that ghost offflying round the barnby bendson his way to lowest-oftMr Pompous said to wizcan we kiss and make upim sorry all about about old poststhat i did find and rake upwhen wiz saw the misltoehis knees they turned to jellyand arm in arm they went insideto watch a stream on te-elly.... [:D] [/quote] Very good [Y] but... Do you think that was wise? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rock The Boat 1,324 Posted December 15, 2013 very good indeed. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Yobocop 1,095 Posted December 15, 2013 good but who''s mr pompous? Til? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wings of a Sparrow 1,408 Posted December 15, 2013 Very good!Chops has competition. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
*** 0 Posted December 15, 2013 [quote user="refjezdavies"]good but who''s mr pompous? Til?[/quote] City 1st...............and he is! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Yobocop 1,095 Posted December 15, 2013 of course... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Buster Douglas 0 Posted December 15, 2013 Very good Spartacus Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Katie Borkins 1 Posted December 15, 2013 Dreadful effort.9/10 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
drurys testamonials V 15 0 Posted December 15, 2013 Amusing[Y] Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mister Chops 7 Posted December 15, 2013 I like your work. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bws Cat 0 Posted December 15, 2013 [IMGhttp://www.oxbridgeediting.co.uk/blog/wp-content/uploads/2012/03/nick-clegg.jpg[/IMG] Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ricardo 7,339 Posted December 15, 2013 I LOL''d a lot[:D][Y] Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
im spartacus canary 0 Posted December 29, 2013 I wrote a song for you and Wiz Mr P i would appreciate your feedback as you weren''t around a couple of weeks ago it is 100% positive so far and i know you won''t mind me dragging up an old post up [;)] Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
im spartacus canary 0 Posted December 30, 2013 Mr pompous you still haven''t said if you like the song i wrote you ? whilst you are on could you give it a look please ? any feedback appreciated [:D] Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Great Mass Debater 1,076 Posted December 31, 2013 A lot of effort been put in there! :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites