jacksioshelp 0 Posted July 14, 2013 Biggrantholt and I have been working on this love song for David McNally: http://youtu.be/dl-2ceUGqqcCould everyone give their feedback on the video and share it around! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tetteys Jig 830 Posted July 14, 2013 Love it although you should have put Olsson rather than Hooper, as he''s actually signed. Now if Hoops goes to QPR, the song will be null and void. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jacksioshelp 0 Posted July 14, 2013 The lyrics were made before we signed any of them, all we need is hooper and someone from leeds! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Green and Yellow fellow 0 Posted July 14, 2013 Cringe-worthy is all the feedback I have. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rock The Boat 1,331 Posted July 14, 2013 I thought it very good. Made me chuckle. A lot of man-love there. Doubt there are many CEO''s in the business world get tribute videos made by their customers. Haha Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bury Yellow 2 Posted July 14, 2013 Brilliant mate. What with our signings, test match and a glass of a dry white amusing little wine mmm purrrfect Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mister Chops 7 Posted July 14, 2013 It''s okay, but it goes on about 90 seconds too long. Get in, do the jokes, get out again. No need for a second/third chorus as by that time the joke''s worn thinnish.Good singing, and some genuinely laugh out loud bits which I won''t list here for fear of spoiling. But I''d shorten it otherwise it just starts dragging on and on (the "We didn''t start the fire" pastiche suffered from the same problem). You should be nailing these in 90 seconds - 2 minutes max. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rock The Boat 1,331 Posted July 14, 2013 Exactly what Mr. Chops says Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Barking Mad Barclay Boy 13 Posted July 14, 2013 chops has hit the nail on the feet i mean head. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Norfolk Mustard 94 Posted July 14, 2013 I think it''s a superb effort! - I''ve circulated it on Twitter & Facebook already... (Not many of my LinkedIn contacts are in Norfolk, so I doubt many of those would ''get it''). Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ur just a man in a jacket 0 Posted July 14, 2013 Superb made me chuckle away!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
splutcho 173 Posted July 14, 2013 I don''t think you''ll ever top the Turner one. Such a shame it got taken down. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Young One 0 Posted July 15, 2013 Excellent, well done. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites