Freddy H 0 Posted March 16, 2004 There once was a poet called BES, Whose rhyming was really a mes(s).When (s) he asked, should I stop?Should I quit at the top?We replied, in affirmative, yes!OK so I am going to get caned for that one, its rather critical of BES, who has obviously put a lot of effort into the posts. However please don’t moan at me too much, my comments are no worse than all of us criticising Easton & Rivers. The quality was there to start, but its just lacking its early sparkle. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
BES 0 Posted March 16, 2004 When(s) SHE asked, should I stop? Dont worry Freddy H......... I like a bit of constructive critisism........... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ashwood 0 Posted March 16, 2004 Come on Freddie, contrary to your own thoughts ,I have rather enjoyed reading the poetry and rhymes supplied by BES. They are all topical , factual, and contain some good humour - Keep up the good literary work BES and leave Freddie to read his copies of Beano or Dandy ! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
